Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
I strongly believe that versatility is the only key to innovation. In today's contemporary world it has become a common sight when one come around many choices for the same commodity.
No matter what one seeks, where one seeks or when one seeks choices are always there and that also in the form of overflowing bucket.Moreover, sometimes it becomes arduous to make a fair judgement.In addition to it,some choices act like a dilemma for the buyer. Furthermore, this is also predicted to uneconomical for the customer as they usually get transformed from a wise person to a spendthrift.
However, this assists in dragging the money from the pockets of customers to the seller.
On the other side of the coin, some people presume that it is a virtue than vice. However, it though helps in making a versatile decision as more the choices, more products to be choosed from. Furthermore, price comparison also becomes easy as the range is towering. Moreover, it also embraces the feeling of competition between the producers which enhances innovation and development to it's peek.
To recapitulate, though choices offer many perks but it is a great dilemma and scam for the buyers.Therefore, choices shouldn't be central idea rather one should focus on quality as less products but flawless products
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07943925234 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99918832004 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621495327103 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2674041253 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.7 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110993985757 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404424172772 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030071383054 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593460383694 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180768431794 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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