Some people believe that the Olympics Games do not have a role in the 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.
It is often considered by some that, there were not much importance for Olympic games in this century. However, in this essay fairly disagree with the statement because, sports events had a vivid place in peoples mind and the nations too. It is not a valid reason that the technical improvements and innovative inventions of 21 st century replace the value of international sport event like Olympic traits like enhancement in physical, financial, social, and so on.
Foremost reason for disagreement that, sports events make peoples capability of the multitude of talent check up and entertainment activity rather than the materialistic technical items. People who are opposing the Olympic game may be by the effects of games in computer or smartphone video games and so on. Physical thrive on different kinds of sports items often identify the world number one fast tracker, players, and so on. Secondly, Olympic games would broaden the horizon not only the players but also the viewers from various nationalities all over the world. Such attributes would not get through 21 century technological developments. For instance, many people ascertain the knowledge regarding various sports items and the wide range of nationalities presence would be available in one stadium.
Likewise, Olympic games would enhance the financial status of many nations and Olympians. Since, make use of such programs would flourish the economy by tourists, players, delegates and far distant inhabitants of host country. Despite that, such events may devoid of cultural diversity and enhance the trade and commerce to some extent. Even though, in twenty first century importance of economic development has been inevitable by many aspects.
To sum up, although, there were controversy related to Olympic events, the emerging criteria which people would not get by technology could be achieved by the numerous sports items held on Olympic day. Since, anyone could not suggest to avoid such games.
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Suggestion: centuries
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...erous sports items held on Olympic day. Since, anyone could not suggest to avoid such...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest avoiding'.
Suggestion: suggest avoiding
...on Olympic day. Since, anyone could not suggest to avoid such games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36217948718 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75046877542 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.463342987 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15321313933 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529978605741 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054190945039 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927851775585 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055468166726 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.