Some people believe that the Olympics Games do not have a role in the 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.
Olympic games plays a vital role between different nations. One of the most controversial issue today leads to that, it is often argued by some people that Olympic games do not have any major role in this century. Nevertheless, I completely disagree with the given statement and given reasons that how Olympic games put impact on this century through some examples and assertions in the further piece of essay.
The first step to understand that, what are the optimistic impacts of Olympic games in 21st century. The prominent reason is that, in the century with full of gadget and machines Olympic games is the platform which provides social communication. Similarly, Olympics are known to be significant as it gives chance to individuals for interacting with people from distinct countries and they can also get to know their cultures. In addition, it is theme of Olympics that, they are held in different countries after every four years and people travel to see their nation playing. Nowadays, people neither have time for themselves nor for there families, therefore this can be the opportunity for them to do outing with their families and friends and spend time with with.
The second foremost reason for disagreement is that, Olympic games increase the financial status of the country in which they are held. Since, it helps the host country's economy by tourism of players and tourists. However, children get to know about vast number of equipments used in games and enhances their knowledge regarding sports. A good illustration is, in a survey of california university, it was shown that Olympics rise 30 percentage financial status of the host country. Even though, in the twenty first century Olympic games have positive impact on people.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that, Olympic games can provide all the things which can not be seen neither in any gadget nor through technology and Olympics is a perfect place to interact socially with people from their hectic schedules, as a result no body can not say no to such fascinating games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, similarly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0350877193 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63467653951 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540935672515 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0117594646 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319771160058 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107812006786 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704477444302 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194405373518 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993571307825 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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