Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People hold different ideas on the aim of the film industry. While some people believe films should only be considered as a means of entertainment, I maintain that educational messages would better qualify a film due to their probability to reflect on people.
On the one hand, watching films has gained popularity as a form of amusement recently. The multi-billion film industry has developed as watching films has been a common choice for relaxing after hectic schedules. For instance, going to a theater is often an option in people’s to-do list when hanging out with friends. Including educational details might put a strain on the audience's mind; therefore, would reserve the audience’s initial tendency to relax. Films should ultimately serve for the purpose of enjoyment only.
On the other hand, movies should be educational due to their significant effect on the audience. It is said that people’s morals and values are shaped by what they watch in films. For example, being undoubtedly curious and imitative, adolescents may develop violent, anti-social behaviors if they are exposed to unhealthy content. By contrast, films can be effectively utilized in education due to the visualization and imagination they stimulate. Therefore, films are advisable to contain invaluable meanings to better educate people.
In conclusion, while a film should be entertaining to attract a large audience, it is undeniable that containing educational values is also essential. From my perspective, a balanced combination of entertaining and educational details would yield optimal results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56275303644 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11557335939 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6818803014 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317023127873 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101705333844 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740105311822 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200650547126 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560066655261 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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