Some people believe that people should retire at 65. While others believe that they should be allowed to work as long as they want to. What is your view point? Discuss.
Retirement at 65 is a default retiring age which has been phased out in some counties. It is prerogative of the employer to set a retirement age for their human talent. Conversely, some people believe that the young generation is deprived of their human rights to integrate into society economically if people are allowed to work beyond their retirement age. I agree with this statement.
The benefits are obvious when a long tenure of office is in place for both employers and employees. Employees who have worked for a long time have a better insight and knowhow of the firm. This saves resources, time, cost, and wastage for corporations. Because both parties are aligned with each other’s expectations, they prove to be the instrument of cost effectiveness. It is a win-win situation.
On the contrary, it seems that allowing employees to work beyond the retirement age outweigh its advantages. The population across the world- estimated to touch seven billion people by 2020 is rising against opportunities in labor market. This may rage an upheaval in the economy. The second point is certain jobs require a great amount of precision, alertness, insight and physical and mental strength. The human body is designed to decay its faculties as time passes. Such a scenario could have detrimental effects. For example, a pilot beyond 65 could jeopardize the lives of passengers owing to his debilitating health and weak eyesight.
In conclusion, both the government and corporations are meant to create jobs. Joblessness could take a monster from and destabilize the whole system. Thus, retiring at 65 is justified, but there should be a little accommodation for retired personal to come to a consulting board in the event of any need.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, may, second, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1013986014 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94676428089 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7187523019 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7894736842 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23767157055 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490457239382 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638553098877 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122086276472 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510034859536 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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