Some people believe that planning for the future is a waste of time because that focusing on the present is more important. Do you agree or disagree?
A number of people subscribe to the belief that placing a great emphasis on the present is more crucial than for the future according to some. I, completely, disagree with the given statement on the basis of some compelling reasons.
Firstly, the most axiomatic reason is rooted in the fact that possessing a vision of the upcoming years allows people to lay the foundation for their developmental prospects such as their career. To put it differently, regardless of one's age, those who plan for their times are bound to catch sight of the future and schedule based on long-lived purposes. A good illustration of this is clearly delineated by Microsoft company setting up by Bill Gates. As a teenager, he had a vision of a personal computer on every desk in every home and eventually he put into effect what he had planned.
Secondly, planning motivates people to try purposefully for achieving their goals which firmly endorses the viewpoint that it is a worthwhile quality aiming for. In another word, the more people precisely plan for both aspects of their life, personal and social. the high the chance of gaining success increase. Such lifestyle in tandem with planning is highly likely to bring about to devote themselves entirely to their goals and keep themselves away from fleeting- aim. This in turn lead they be of full of determination as well as spiritual enrichment as a direct result of purposes.
To conclude, I personally take the view that planning should be highlighted as an important part of people's life. This is mainly because it potentially gives rise to success in aims and motivation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96691176471 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79775063737 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9434425286 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235520319558 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742375064762 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705516630056 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14199538364 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586051640345 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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