Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People have different views on whether or not professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be forced to work in the country where they passed their internship.
I can understand those who believe that interns should continue working in the country where they are trained. The host country in which individuals come to improve their skills and learn new things spends huge sums of money to provide training facilities. Also, officials count on the abilities of such people to improve their country, and they give a chance to apprentices to experience and apply what have learned at university in the real working environment. For example, doctors are given a chance to communicate with different patients with various health problems and treat them based on the guidance given by experienced and professional doctors. In this condition, learners not only can distinguish their weaknesses and improve them but also can use the experience of some skilful people and get promoted immediately. So, it is not fair that apprentices leave the place of their training instantly without compensation for the services provided for them. Therefore, they should live in the country where they have passed their apprenticeship for a certain period.
However, I believe that professionals should not be forced to do this, and they should be allowed to make their own decision about the country or place they wish to work. This is because people work efficiently and wholeheartedly when they are satisfied with their work atmosphere and salary. In addition to this, most of the time, poor countries send some of their doctors or engineers to developed countries to enrich and update their knowledge with the hope that they return and help their fellow citizens. For instance, in my country, every year, many doctors are supported to go overseas to learn about the treatment of some threatening diseases, such as making vaccines for malaria. Many doctors do this voluntarily in order to serve their people, especially those living in deprived areas. To make this happen, such people should have enough freedom to choose the place or country they want to work in.
In conclusion, in my view, interns in any job should be left to make their own decision about in which country they prefer to work.
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... place or country they want to work in. In conclusion, in my view, interns in an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09574468085 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71516372964 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502659574468 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.7238793464 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.733333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485017185091 0.244688304435 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186536236838 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135213805577 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341675354426 0.151304729494 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610295795059 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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