Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Doctors and Engineers have become the most populous professions across the world. There is an interesting trend seen in these line of work where people study and get their degree in their home country while pursue the work in other countries. There are various factors for this trend, but in my opinion individuals should be given the freedom to choose country of work. Neverthless, this essay discusses both the perspectives.
The prominent reason to support my view is that, nowadays most of the countries have good education facilities which provide quality education from play school to degree. But when it comes to jobs every country has a different job market which is hugely based on its location, economy and government. For instance, countries like United Arab Emirates is specialised in oil industry and tourism, due to which it demands people of the similar skills and so is the pay like. Thus, the professions like engineer or doctors are definitely required, but not highly valued when compared to countries like United States which holds the IT hub of the world.
Secondly, a fraction of these professionals especially doctors would like to expand their knowledge which can happen when they move to different countries. For example, an individual who has studied and practised medicine in tropical countries is proficient of diseases the place would hold, but may not be completely aware of diseases in colder regions, when one practises is different ecosystems, it helps gain extra knowledge and be best at what they do. Additionally, the people would like to have better standards of living which might be lacking in their own countries like working population in fields of medical and engineering from developing countries like India would want to move to United States for the high standards and high salaries.
In conclusion, the it is best left to individuals to decide on where they can practise and thrive, this will help people and as well as the government.
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Suggestion: job
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09480122324 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70581896908 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553516819572 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8336864398 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27335058692 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974582216973 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534941531964 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163516404715 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767720899004 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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