In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
With the advent of industrialisation, numerous industries have taken birth in different parts of the world. These are the major indicators of development and economic growth.
However, there are some detrimental effects to the environment especially to air and water that come along with this growth. This essay aims to discuss some of causes and remedies to its ill effects.
One of key causes of the damage to water is that manufacturing units release a lot of untreated waste into the natural water sources. This waste contains a lot of chemicals that is fatal for the underwater habitat and in a long run can lead to an imbalance in marine ecosystem. For example, the liquid released by paint manufacturing industry has compounds like acetone, which effect the pH levels of waters, making them more acidic in nature. Likewise, the effects on air is similar, where companies release large amounts of smoke into the atmosphere that contain harmful gases like methane and ethane. This has direct effect on all the animals and birds as every living creature on land needs air to survive. Additionally, there is a lack of stringent rules and regulations against such kind of industries due to which there is a lack of heed.
Although, there are a few possible solutions that can help prevent this problem. First and foremost, government should develop a set of precautionary measures that every industry and construction sites should follow. If there is a sign of negligence, then strict actions should be enforced. Additionally, all the industries that have a potential to cause any kind of harm to air or water resources should equip themselves with an in-house treatment plant that will purify the water and gases before releasing them back into the nature.
In conclusion, there are both objective and subjective reasons for this declining quality, the most sensible solution is adhere to practises that cause less adverse effects on the environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the causes') or simply say ''some causes''.
Suggestion: some of the causes; some causes
...this growth. This essay aims to discuss some of causes and remedies to its ill effects. One...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ue to which there is a lack of heed. Although, there are a few possible solutions tha...
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Line 8, column 122, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'adhered'.
Suggestion: adhered
... quality, the most sensible solution is adhere to practises that cause less adverse ef...
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Line 8, column 132, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'practise'.
Suggestion: practise
...the most sensible solution is adhere to practises that cause less adverse effects on the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1246105919 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83514086058 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0687440524 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245001535312 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717113819153 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412800408403 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124670976861 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451300615032 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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