It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Life is full of surprises be it personal or professional. Everybody at a certain point in life are at dilemma about taking risks. There are situations where challenges can bring in big fortunes while other times it can lead to loss. Hence, there are both pros and cons and this essay will discuss both the positive and negative perspective.
To commence, when one learns to take challenges in life, it can lead to better life. For instance, one of my friend named Natalie was offered a job by an organisation in a foreign country. She was doubtful about this because the company was started very recently and had not seen any profits yet. Moreover, opting for this job would mean a new life, new place a whole lot of transformation. She being a risk-taker took this opportunity and years later it all turned out to be fine. It is necessary that one takes calculated risks in life because not very challenge ends with success.
Despite the benefits, there is an ugly side to this. There is a fifty percent chance for a risk to turn out to be adverse. It becomes difficult for people to handle negative outcomes as it can lead to mental stress and sometimes depression. For example, nowadays there are many people who have started their own business online, not all of them are profitable there are many that have died due to lack of customers. All the hard work and resources goes in vain. There are instances where such business owners have gone bankrupt. Hence, risk involves a lot of dangers to the extent that people can face death. So, the question arises is it even worth taking risks?
In conclusion, taking blind risk is a bad idea. But rather, it depends on the circumstances and one’s financial and emotional intelligence to face it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lot
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Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69480519481 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5896393725 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9464522106 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195868242637 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567917880815 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547570983386 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114149428392 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392287931081 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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