Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that some people believe that music is a good way to bring people from different culture and ages together. There are multiple reasons for this belief. This essay will discuss the following the same.
First and foremost, music is not confined to any particular language or culture. A look back to the history suggests that irrespective of the location, ethnicity or colour people from all over the world have embraced and enjoyed music on different occasions. Over the years, with advent of globalisation and advancement in technology, music from one part of the world is heard and admired by people on the other end. It is not necessary for one to understand language, the tune, beats and rhythm are the factors that people fall in love with. Additionally, musical instruments brings musicians from different part of the world together. For instance, one of my friend named Natalie who was a trained pianist published her music online, which was liked by another artist from Australia who played guitar. This likeness bought them together, eventually they formed a band and put out music together. The factors like language barrier, difference in the culture was never a problem in their collaboration.
Additionally, music introduces a calm and soothing effect on one’s mind. At the same time, music can also help alleviate stress and tension. Not only humans, but this effect is seen even in animals as well. This universal nature of music is what unites people. For instance, music produces by great singers like Micheal Jackson is enjoyed by people from all over the world, and has brought in the pop culture era in every part of world.
Lastly, I strongly agree with the fact that music brings people closer at an intellectual level, and in the process eliminating the conflicting factors like age and culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, so, well, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00980392157 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61639832152 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3821198099 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1764705882 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310231056201 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10129401383 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101126372814 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225407422795 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904872425271 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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