Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas other argue that homework plays an important role in the education of the children.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In recent times, an increasing number of people are concerned about the role of the setting of homework in the education of children. Opinions diverge on whether homework shouldn’t be given by teachers or it takes a crucial part in education. Personally, I am of the opinion with the latter view, even though the former shows some positives.
On the one hand, homework has an important role to play in the schooling of children. The main benefit of homework that is it encourages independent learning and problem solving as children have to work alone and at their own pace. in doing so, children could develop an independent study habit, which is necessary for people and would help them not only when they go upgrade but also when they grow up, too. Besides, homework may help children to have the opportunity to practice more outside after school. For example, the time of the lesson at school could be not enough for the students to practice after study that they may not understand all the knowledge, so homework would be a great choice for them to consolidate their understanding of the concepts taught by teachers at school.
On the other hand, homework is an unnecessary burden on children. Firstly, the school day is already long enough, and it leaves the children too tired to do any further study when they return home. Secondly, there is no evidence to support the idea that homework does nothing to improve educational outcomes. Take an example, in some countries in the world, such as Finland, where school children are not given homework, regularly top international educational league tables while the nations where setting homework is the norm. Thirdly, if homework appears in all the subjects at school, there wouldn’t be a little for the children to relax after a busy time at school, and so on, it could make the children tired and stress.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed, although the setting of homework certainly has its drawbacks, in my opinion, its benefits would outweigh them in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89884393064 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64801246139 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540462427746 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.957019241 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416044968003 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161899925792 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895086674001 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239196103301 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104631189237 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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