Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
some would argue that it homework is not provided to the school going children by the teachers and others argue that it has imperative role in the education for the students. This essay will list out both the views and I personally believe that tasks related to study afterhours of school should be encouraged.
To embark on, when it comes to education around the world there is a feeling that homework is a burden to children and teachers should not insist on giving one and education should to constrained for school hours and not be extended. For example, a study conducted on a group of young students has revealed that they do not want do any works related to school after hours and almost 80% of them preferred to play or rest after school.
On the other hand, importance of improving the knowledge must be taught to children by their parents when there is possibility and should engage them in more learning even after school hours as this can improve concentration and better academic perfomance overall. Although it is boring to learn after schools teachers handover some work so that students should not lose the track of subject. For example, in India all the institutions will give some work to kids after there period at school and parents also help kids to complete these tasks and this has shown better knowledge among the individuals then that don't complete the given task.
In conclusion, despite the boring part of continuing the same learning through out the day the reason behind it is a better future and greater knowledge and if I were a teacher I need my students to complete the homework and submit it on the next day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75694444444 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48125689973 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517361111111 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1658187913 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.25 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325225639794 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146932565951 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983849675555 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196534661042 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111062774614 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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