Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others think that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Many people claim that beginning a career after graduating university or college has more advantages unlike others think that after school it is possible to start working in effective way. Let us examine both views before reaching concentrate decision.
As we live in a society that is highly developed in all respects today, the basis of such development is of course strong knowledge, skills and experience. Let us examine both views before reaching concentrate decision.
Many support the view that pursue a career after graduating from college because the demand for it so strong. If you apply for a job in the state body, you most provide information about your education which university you have graduated from, your speciality and provide a copy of diploma. Moreover, people are often envious of those who operate in a uniform. For instance, I am very keen on doctors' clothes.
Inspite of the fact that a person with a diploma has academic ability, it does not mean that school graduates will not be able to live well, will lag behind in development. If we think carefully, we can find an employee with secondary education in all fields. There are plenty of people who are comfortable with their favorite profession, even if they don’t pursue a 4-year student life or study for a master’s degree. In them we see a luxury house, a couple of cars.
In general, whether he is a university graduate or an ordinary high school graduate, in my opinion, everyone should be able to build their future as they wish, and pursue a profession that they love and enjoy. On the contrary, it is not uncommon to be surrounded by unpleasant fantasies that evoke a sense of sadness and remorse about what happened to me after 4 years of study or why I didn’t do well in school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a copy of diploma. Moreover, people are often envious of those who operate in a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, in general, of course, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79153094463 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67520525348 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599348534202 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2292760622 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165127555353 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489598871866 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686447901483 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898050056253 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725589323473 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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