In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
All public transportation system such as cars, buses and lorries will be shaped driverless as people who are able to travel inside these transports as a passenger in the future. In my opinion, the good sides of driveless vehicles can outweigh the drawbacks.
It has long been suspected that, if a number of drivers who drive cars or buses are reduced by the government, it will be beneficial for both passengers and themselves owing to dearth of car accidents. To give a clear example, although some drivers drive a car carefully with attention, it is important to consider that how many people died of car casualty in the road due to lack of knowledge which related to driving. Because providing more safety atmosphere in vehicles mainly cars and buses, driverless vehicles would be decent for people who are passengers. One more advantage side of driverless vehicles is that the cost which is paid for drivers will be a lower regardless of destination which is far or close compare with now, which is why it could once be a mecca for passengers as well as drivers.
Nevertheless, there are some disadvantage sides of this issue. Firstly, it might increase the rate of unemployment even though there are other sectors which are able to hire people with a proper job. Unlike other professions, driving a car is an easy and well-paid job compare to others, because it does not require a high qualification for driving.
In conclusion, I would not wish that the advantages of driverless are more greater than setbacks of it, thus it can overcome the disadvantages of driverless transports.
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In the last decades,…
In the last decades, technology has taken a long step forward in robotic and machine learning. It is predicted that transportations will be automatic, and drivers are no longer needed. From my point of view, this improvement will greatly benefit economics and society.
First, driverless cars mitigate the risk of accidents caused by humans. Thousands of people die or get injured every year due to car accidents, and most of them come from the driver's mistakes, such as over-speeding, alcohol-consuming, and rule violations. An autonomous vehicle is programmed to observe the speed limit and other policies, and it is not affected by external factors like alcohol or painkillers (which can make people sleepy). Moreover, a car never feels tired, it keeps running as long as the fuel is available. Self-driving technology can cover all the problems attached to human health conditions.
A second advantage of developing this system is the contribution to the environment and economics. Since the machine can calculate the optimal trace to travel in real time, congestion is less likely to happen. The improvement in traffic reduces waste of energy and carbon dioxide emission, which will immediately lower air pollution. In addition to that, the reduction brings financial benefits as it makes transportation more productive and saves maintenance costs.
Though human technology has not yet reached this level of innovation, it seems promising compared to what we have already attained so far. There can be no doubt that self-driving vehicles will elevate our lives in the future once we master the technology behind them.
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first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91481481481 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8844814432 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7889774059 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.7 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34296134019 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123488871994 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895158071167 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191455171499 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10736674904 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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