Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successfulcareer, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful
career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about university or college is the best way to prepare for their career path. While I accept that this is true in many cases, I believe that getting to a straight job after school can be equally fulfilling and beneficial in many ways.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why students to continue their studies may lead to a satisfying working life. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become to doctor, teacher or lawyer without having a relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job with high salaries and a modern working environment. They also almost receiving respects to colleagues and employers. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in an organization. Young people who do not have degrees from universities or colleagues will not able to compete.
On the other hand, I believed that students can find happiness in their choice by getting a job straight. For instance, if young people start a career early, they will acquire more professional experience and practical skills related to their chosen profession. Also, they may lead to gain more promotion with experiences. Furthermore, High school leaver who an adventurous spirit can earn money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent in beloved their family members and they will start own family early if they want. Young people can eventually lead to a fulfilling working life because it could help people find a job, they are passionate about
In conclusion, although there are advantages of higher education, pursuing a career early in life, in my view, is just as experience and young people may find their calling along the way to successful

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in many cases, in my view, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84757484172 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9533866356 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.866666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181626133624 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588889020723 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702320946794 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122461815184 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904810176395 0.056905535591 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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