Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
After finishing school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their study. Although there are some benefits to get a job straight after school, I personally agree that it is better for young people to continue a higher study.
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. With tuition costs rising in many countries, many high school graduates would prefer to find a work rather than continue their study, saving them a lot of money. They could also gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession, leading to promotions and a successful career.
Despite the above arguments, I believe that attending university or college is beneficial for children in the long term. Firstly, most students will be thoroughly trained in their chosen fields and are taught various work-related skills in a higher education. For example, university students in Vietnam often undertake an internship at the end of a program to see how their studies match up in the real world. Secondly, being a high school graduate will probably not open up the door to many rewarding careers as finishing a higher education. For instance, it is impossible to become a doctor or a lawyer without having a relevant degree. Having received qualifications from a university or college, young people will probably be more able to compete in this competitive job market, since companies mostly seek for employees who have got academic ability and interpersonal skills to add talents to their workforce.
In conclusion, I believe that pursue a higher education is more advantageous as students will likely to acquire a board range of skills that can often qualify them for a wider range of career choices in different fields, which offer them more room for advancement.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15719063545 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84898797383 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602006688963 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7330944944 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183426589696 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720332186169 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620697626647 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113730175611 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655215365873 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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