Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People's opinion differ as to whether or not tourists should follow local customs and behavior. I will discuss both views but personally, I believe that travelers visiting foreign countries should follow the local tradition and culture.
On the one hand, the host country should welcome cultural differences because following a novel custom would be challenging for an international visitor. For example, some tourists, especially who are on a diet, would find it hard to try Chinese dishes because most of them are greasy and spicy. Furthermore, embracing different cultures would allow the host country to attract more visitors because travelers who feel that they are welcomed in a new country despite the cultural differences would be more comfortable and visit this place again.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that tourists should follow the local customs and behavior in order to show their respect to a foreign country as well as make their journey more . For instance, it is necessary for visitors to dress appropriately like wearing modest and conservative clothing when visit a local temple to indicate respect to a sacred place. In addition, immersing in local culture and language will also likely to encourage tourists to have a deeper understanding of other nations. This will not only enrich travelers' knowledge but also help them to communicate better with local people, making the trip easier and probably cheaper. For example, if visitors have a basic knowledge of the local language, they can read menus, ask for directions or even haggle over prices.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that be endearing with locals when traveling aboard is more essential since it will probably help our trips to be as hassle-free as possible. To do this, we should make our research, exploring the cultures of our next destinations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
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Suggestion: .
...untry as well as make their journey more . For instance, it is necessary for visit...
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...r directions or even haggle over prices. In conclusion, although both views certa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20846905537 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78902529294 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5667752443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.366467125 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.9 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374819098567 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158496293491 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129099972974 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240058529428 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126298565118 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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