Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion

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...ers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While t...
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...ile there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue...
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...ue that it is better to go to college or university. The option to start work st...
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...t after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start...
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...e want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become i...
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...ecome independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a fam...
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... family. In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather t...
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... rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have th...
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... have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to th...
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...o their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career. ...
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...at it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly, academi...
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...emic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossib...
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...mpossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degre...
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...relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better...
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... better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with ...
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...with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly comp...
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...gly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position ...
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... position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a univer...
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...niversity or college will not be able to compete. For the reasons mentioned abov...
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...e, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers...
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...rs if they continue their studies beyond school level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16974169742 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8114061562 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6465244024 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200704114711 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686585540278 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735231488414 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580466719482 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632454837799 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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