Art has a lot of forms and is considered to be an essential element to be holistically whole as a human person. Ironically, in this modern world, it is not widely encouraged and of less importance in some countries where families are not that open on the concept of it. This essay will explain the two views and my opinion, in line with respective examples on the thought that art is an essential subject for children at school and not a waste of time.
First, I believe that art is essential to be a part of school curriculum because it is a mode on how children will learn to express themselves. Singing, painting, and dancing are some examples of these which I think will be important to develop a child’s ego , worth and self esteem. For example, a depressed child can truly denote his or her feelings through painting or song writing. This will serve as a channel to vent out what is bothering him or her inside. Indulging in art is like a form of catharsis wherein you spill out all your emotions out to make u feel better.
On the other hand, an added miscellaneous and tuition fee expenses will be a drawback of it putting in school’s curriculum. Although, it is not considered as a substantial subject usually by some schools yet adding this will further result to hire art teachers thus, adding up to the school expenditures in line with salaries. At the same time, schools will ask extra payments to parents in order to compensate the wages for their hired staffs. For instance in my country, parents are protesting to one of the known private schools because of added fees from extracurricular activities such as annual fashion shows and art painting sessions. It will be a disadvantage most especially to families that belongs to the low socio economic status
Personally, I am an artist by heart but currently employed as a nurse. Due to my country’s norms and stigma, I was not able to pursue my passion, which is the love of art. As what my parents always say, in art I will not have a better future since I will be earning below average because it is not in demand. In my opinion, I agree that adding art to schools for children to study is better and will yield to good results. Through this way, it can be a form and channel for outlet of unresolved emotions and at the same time unleash their hidden talents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56161137441 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72512135585 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526066350711 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1975737216 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.235294118 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8235294118 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14179692016 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050652354919 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380624568015 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918360066002 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224385334067 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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