Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability. Others believe that there are more important factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that how to become successful in sports is physic and health. Others think that there are more important areas. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some argument in favor t of success in sports depends on physical ability. First, sports for higher level are believed to equalize sports health opportunities among young adolescent. But higher level it just suitable for people have good physical ability. This good physical support, presumes they easily achieve the challenge of sports work. Sports are a type of physical that requires a lot of physicality, not only that, but also requires a lot of height and spirit. Therefore, it can be seen that most athletes are in good physical conditions to have also to participate in competition such as running 200 kilometers or swimming. Second, have good physical ability is more suitable for success in sports because that would probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified competition about sports, which benefits society in the long run. Example, in many competition about sports, almost have one athletes have good physical ability than any athletes can be a winner than other opponents. In fact, it is acknowledged that skilled and physical health is imperative to foster sports growth and development in any nations.
Nevertheless, some people think that it not just depends on physical ability and we can focus on many important area. First, the government always upholds and encourage everyone need to exercise and improve sports anywhere or anytime are believed to equalize sports opportunities among people regardless of their family background or their health. Sports is an important part for development people health. Even when such or health, good health, sports is suitable for everyone and anyone can have success in sports not for physical ability. This sports support, presumably, tends not only to increase the overall health rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority because when society always believed that people don’t have good physical ability will be stress, so it eventually promotes an egalitarian society. Example, in Vietnam have a primary example for people don’t have good physical ability can success in sports is Nguyen Son Lam. When he born, due to effects of Agent Orange behind after the war, he had a skeletal deformity that made his limbs weak. Especially. When his friends go to school but Jen can’t did. However, now he is the Chairman of the Board of Directors of Shining Training Join Stock Company and the first person can conquering Fansipan Peak with wooden crutches, this can see that sport can depends on their dream. Second, everyone can exercise and development would probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. It, instead, would be a more sports viable option if the resources were focused on supporting for everyone.
I were discussed both sides of the argument. In my perspective, sports need many important factors not just only have physical ability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 883, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun competition seems to be countable; consider using: 'many competitions'.
Suggestion: many competitions
...ts society in the long run. Example, in many competition about sports, almost have one athletes ...
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Line 2, column 926, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one athlete', 'an athlete', or simply 'athletes'?
Suggestion: one athlete; an athlete; athletes
...y competition about sports, almost have one athletes have good physical ability than any ath...
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Line 3, column 983, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...ss in sports is Nguyen Son Lam. When he born, due to effects of Agent Orange behind ...
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Line 3, column 1152, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'can't' requires base form of this verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
... his friends go to school but Jen can’t did. However, now he is the Chairman of the...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: Did you mean 'was'?
Suggestion: was
... focused on supporting for everyone. I were discussed both sides of the argument. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2643.0 1615.20841683 164% => OK
No of words: 510.0 315.596192385 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18235294118 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61899502636 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454901960784 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 832.5 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4743147221 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.72 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 8.67935871743 253% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29226859293 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979618822477 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654321959956 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209024144772 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017185289329 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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