Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability. Others believe that there are more important factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, have some people think that the important for how to become successful in sports is physical ability. Others think that there are more important areas. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of some people believed that success in sports depends on many improvements factors not just physical ability. First, government always propaganda and encouragement for everyone about sports are believed to equalize health and sports opportunities among young adolescent regardless of their family background or their health. This sports, support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall lover sports rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which eventually promotes an egalitarian society. Moreover, sports is an important part for development people health, thereby, it is suitable for everyone and anyone can have success in sports depends on their dream or their hope. Second, everyone knows the importance of sports and exercise no matter how weak or old would probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, is is acknowledged that skilled and knowledgeable human is imperative to foster sports growth and development in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant problem would be far more significant than the minor benefits once if people believed it just suitable for people have good physical ability. First, some people believed that sports is just suitable for people have good physical ability would likely correspond with a tremendous health strain on a country. People don’t know about health importance and they can overthinking about that they weak and not suitable for sports, people could become over-reliant on the state budget for health, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as transport infrastructure and healthcare system. Second, people have thinking about sports is just suitable for people have good physical ability would tempt many young people think that including those who are not take care about themselves or show no interest sports pursuits, thereby great burdens for government and people with weak and unstable health in the future and potentially wasting time that these people could have spent time pursuing more proper sport method. It, instead, would be a more sports viable option if the resources focused on supporting lover sports or less privilege yet gifted.
In conclusion, despite the advantages of long-distance human health and convenience, sports has many favorable points than drawback. It is, thus, hoped that important part for development society in the future, especially the people should consider about objective view of who is suitable for sports.
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Suggestion: is
...efits society in the long run. In fact, is is acknowledged that skilled and knowledge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, thus, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2413.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4592760181 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69623368642 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.6440049499 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.8125 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3002539877 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120267261169 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864828446632 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190565523484 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654881735035 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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