Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, our lives are more developed and modern than in the past. So, we will have many activities that are meaningful for our lives. Some people believe that teenagers should be required to volunteer in their spare time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. In my opinion, I agree with this extent very much.
In the first place, this helps teenger become good and helpful citizens for the community. In modern life, there are many jobs without money for teenagers to do, especially in a strongly pandemic disease . For example, we can join volunteer groups of any local to prepare helpings for those who have to go to fight the epidemic like doctors, soldiers, or we can create a group to make masks and hand sanitizer to present for people.
The second reason being to improve soft skills for ourselves. Since the advancement of technology, it makes them become more passive. Therefore, they lose their soft skills, the activity such as volunteering is a fantastic opportunity to gain a lot of skills. For instance, charity programs to remote areas are not a bad idea to develop teamwork that is very helpful to apply for any jobs.
In conclusion, instead of playing games on mobile phones, you can do activities that can improve the community to become better and better in general and yourself in particular.
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can benefit teenagers and the community as well To what extent do you agree or disagree56
- Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older while others think they should stay at home with the family Discuss both views and give your own opinion73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87280701754 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5674702105 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640350877193 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3547180822 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4615384615 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248053285121 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101807280604 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144862351189 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156780923456 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133897972602 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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