Some people believe that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change, other believe that just government and large business which can make a difference. Discuss
In the threshold of the new era, climate change has been a phenomenon affecting both habitants and inhabitants in all walks of life. Notwithstanding the given viewpoint that only head authorities and large-scale organized companies could tackle the current challenges of environments, I strongly opine that individuals should also hold the responsibility for preserving climate change.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that government and big companies should act as leading roles in dealing with green issues. First and foremost, the government, with its legislation could strictly imposed new laws and effective measure namely monitoring factory waste or managing fuel exploitation. Taking Amsterdam as a particular example, no sooner did the censorship of petrol vehicles place on the city than the air quality has been completely improved in the last five years. Aside from that, with the advanced eco-friendly inventions and wide-spreading projects launched by multinational companies, there have been ongoing trends towards preserving the environment and calling for people’s practical actions, giving rise to the positive changes in global warming and related issues.
On the other hand, I believe that not until do individuals join hand with government and entrepreneurs, the issue will be solved to its root. That is to say, estimating a normal household generates four kilograms of disposal per day, if there was the reduction of trash a half, city’s total waste would halve in compare to current figure, which would probably reduce the burden on pollution.
In conclusion, it can be said that climate change could be deterred by individuals while joining force with authorities and organizations. By doing so, we can make sure that our next generation would inherit a betterment for the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'impose'
Suggestion: impose
...nt, with its legislation could strictly imposed new laws and effective measure namely m...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48754448399 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11109789379 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669039145907 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1003025712 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.2 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161991408029 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561899259106 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513042021198 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936171175116 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447760256969 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.