Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others however argue that circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people hold the opinion that any kind of crime punishment must be fixed. While, others debates that state of affairs of any crime, and motivation for committing should always be consider at the time of sentencing. I, however, believe that in order to de-escalate the number of crimes it’s better to fixed punishment accordingly.
To commence with, I would like to outline the few advantages of those crime procedures which are fixed for every punishment that ultimately reduce the crime rate across the country. For instance, hi-speeds of any vehicle are strictly not allowed in service road or every cargo vehicles are not permitted to overload more than the intimated weight. These procedures are being followed by several countries that actually reduce the crime and incident rate among the country. One of the obvious benefit of it is people always be scared before taking any step towards any crime. Moreover, numerous studies have consistently found by different countries that crime rate is much higher in those countries wherein sentencing of crime is unfixed.
Furthermore, many intellectual people are concerned that there are plenty of countries around the globe especially third world countries where punishments are not justify according to any crime which indicates the less care from government for citizens. As well as, undefined procedures of anything within the country could be more dangerous either it’s relevant to crime or something else. Moreover, many a time I have noticed that in several countries government set the punishment after evaluating crime that actually is better way to control the crime.
In conclusion, in order to control crime rate and incident government should form the criteria of every single plan of action for any type of crime to minimize the risk factors among the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'be' and 'consider'.
Suggestion: be always consider
...e, and motivation for committing should always be consider at the time of sentencing. I, however, ...
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Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'justified'.
Suggestion: justified
...rld countries where punishments are not justify according to any crime which indicates ...
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Line 9, column 450, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...y a time I have noticed that in several countries government set the punishment after eva...
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Line 13, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ize the risk factors among the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, third, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31632653061 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67157330073 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4540961742 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323734083922 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13486858433 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696020388218 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223580381104 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908331063244 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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