Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
It is contended that there is no need for citizens to spend their income on tax from the government but to keep all of them instead. While this thinking is valid to a certain extent, I do believe that it is essential for each individual to pay for the tax.
On the one hand, it is argued that people should put aside the money they have earned rather than allocating for the levy. The main reason for this idea is that in recent years, tax rates are substantially higher compared with residents' incomes. To be more specific, in this highly competitive market, there is a discrepancy in the wage among individuals, namely high-qualified workforce or manual labor. Therefore, it would impose a financial burden on people who are from low-income backgrounds due to the basic demand they have to meet.
However, this is a flawed view because it acts as a deterrent from taking advantage of several benefits from paying tax. First and foremost, it is undeniable that taxes are used to provide various public services to each citizen. Consequently, only by allocating a part of their expenses for the national budget can taxpayers reap the benefits from utilizing several amenities, particularly in some emergency situations. Secondly, there is no doubt that people’s salaries are obtained from jobs that the government created, hence adopting tax policies is regarded as a responsibility. In fact, if money is contributed to the financial budget they would stand a better chance of receiving different working benefits. One good illustration of this is when teachers devote their money to the local and national resources, they would be given extra supplements on holidays or special occasions.
In conclusion, while some believe that people are not necessary to pay for tax, I would like to reiterate that tax has a crucial role to play in the well-being of humanity. Given the situation, the local and national authorities should reduce the cost of excise so that everyone can afford it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99397590361 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85376903015 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575301204819 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7544059158 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26973578123 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838322138873 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665658560898 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156937872124 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026976052146 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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