Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Few individuals contend that it is necessary to concentrate on local news, whereas others believe that the awareness of global news is of greater importance. This essay attempts to shed light on both sides of this argument and then I will give my own perspective.
On the one hand, there are people who argue that there should be favoritism for international information. The main reason for this belief is that it provides the latest reports of the global urgent issues. In terms of the environment, in current life, the natural habitat is seriously deteriorated by deforestation, global warming, ice melting, and so on. Consequently, only by perceiving the urgency of those affairs on a global scale can citizens make greater efforts to ameliorate the problems. In addition to this, keeping updated with worldwide news encourages us to grasp the spread of the pandemic situation. One good illustration of this is when American news coverage demonstrates the alarming number of people who suffer from the Covid-19 epidemic every day, inhabitants from all over the world will recognize the severity of the matter to make timely decisions to alleviate the outbreak of it.
On the other hand, it is often argued that in fact, the information of a country should make headlines among citizens. People have this opinion because from the perspective of employment, keeping abreast of the recent variations of the labor market presents an opportunity for them to advance corresponding alterations related to skills and knowledge to adapt to a new working community, encouraging them to apply for lucrative jobs as well as move up the career ladder. Furthermore, people can reap the benefits of keeping up-to-date with political domestic news. In fact, several events such as voting for a new position of principal are essential for the development of a nation, thus, each citizen stands a better chance of being a candidate in the election, contributing to a sense of responsibility toward society.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits; however, On the whole, I consider focusing on national and local reports as a more appropriate option in most circumstances.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20679886686 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01920014265 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606232294618 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.523278876 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.384615385 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6923076923 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186666700014 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604156845923 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510701141129 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112244484305 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340599919748 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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