Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts, and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?
It is true that there is an increasing number of people who back up privacy-related information on the Internet. Personally, I believe this trend is both positive and negative.
On the one hand, saving private information namely banking, contacts, and so on is advantageous to a certain extent. It is undeniable that people can reap the benefit of utilizing their information thanks to its convenience. In fact, in today's fast-paced life, people are responsible for different tasks which consist of several significant pieces of information. Therefore, they stand a better chance of flexibly taking reports depending on personal needs without confusion after all relevant data had been stored on the Internet. One good illustration of this is when an employee has to perform a transaction through an automatic trading spot, only by opening his handset device and extracting passwords can they simply withdraw or send money.
On the other hand, despite the aforementioned benefits, this trend also contributes to some detrimental effects. A major drawback is that their information is easily stolen by Internet hackers and virus distributions. In fact, given the information citizens enter into different sources of the Internet containing money or possession-related reports, cybercriminals tend to infiltrate to take advantage of this to seek profit and in extreme cases, have a bad motive to penetrate the private life of each person. A particularly good example of this is that according to the 2014 survey of Japan, a fan broke into his idol’s apartment in the night relying on her address that was found after she had shared her bank account through a social networking site.
In conclusion, while there are some positive aspects to entering personal and private information online, it is evident that the negative impacts of online information storage outweigh the benefits. Given the situation, I believe that it is of paramount importance to memorize those kinds of data such as banking and address.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, after all, as to, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31661442006 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09407723586 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614420062696 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3580041225 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.461538462 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28521568975 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871206585597 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733008591209 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174678795741 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851580386733 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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