Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?
In recent years, thanks to the outburst of technology, the Internet has become the private information stockpile for a number of people. This information may include banking accounts, contacts and addresses. From my perspective, it may have both pros and cons for numerous reasons.
On the one hand, it is apparent that storing personal information online means saving more time. In the past, a huge number of people chose to write their passwords or identification numbers in a notebook, they would have to expend more effort to take these notes with them and check where they recorded this information. While nowadays, cloud archiving services provide users with a great capacity to save their data, with a single mobile phone, they could access their personal info anywhere and anytime. It especially benefits those who have a bad ability to memorize their information.
On the other hand, storing sensitive information is considered a risk of illegal identity disclosure. As there is still an enormous number of holes in cybersecurity, hackers could easily access and leak out our private data, such as bank accounts or personal emails. As a result, the criminals may steal victims’ money or sell their digital information to third parties, which may lead to victims’ loss of honour or dignity. Apparently, it is a fact that more and more accidents are resulting from victims who failed to overcome embarrassment.
To summarize, it is undoubted that cyberspace is a potential choice for clients to consume its cloud archiving services. However, users still have to consider its negative side as privacy risks are not solved yet.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, may, so, still, third, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21886792453 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83155690198 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0442254736 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177557944818 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635765393851 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738216229147 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933860224284 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451771177327 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.