Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy Do you agree or disagree To what extent do you agree

Essay topics:

Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree.

These days, it is observed that marketing on social media may affect purchasers’ choices. I totally concur with this statement.

Firstly, consumers’ buying decisions are usually impacted by social influencers on social media marketing channels. If a Key Opinion Leader (KOL) shares a post on Instagram or Twitter about her new clothes, illustrates how affordable they are, her followers will be interested in searching for information about those outfits. With a large number of the audience seeing these influencers’ posts every day in such social networks, not only can they sponsor for the brand, but also have a large effect on purchasing decisions. According to the PwC total retail survey 2016, 45% of global respondents, it is said that reading reviews, comments, and feedback written by celebrities influences their shopping behaviors.

Secondly, social networks allow buyers to create discussions among followers. Besides the effect of social network such as making consumers keep up with the newest trends, providing feedback, join the brand fan community, there are also other advantages like sweepstakes and promotion, which ultimately make an informed buying decision. As stated in Forbes’s report, a whopping 81 percent of respondents admitted that recommendations and posts from family and friends directly impacted their purchasing choices, while 78% of people said that social media posts of companies and businesses influence their ordering selections. And as reported by 7SAT, 88% purchasers decide to order the product which they have found detailed information, feedback of other shoppers on social media, and truly been interested in it.

In conclusion, it is undeniable that nowadays, social network marketing has a strong impact on clients’ decisions.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...r information about those outfits. With a large number of the audience seeing these influencers’ ...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...feedback, join the brand fan community, there are also other advantages like sweepstakes and promoti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64074074074 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95208419551 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681481481481 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.383208337 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146521764389 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632249809404 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06437580701 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911680352575 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190631531753 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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