Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts, and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?
It is true that people now tend to use online accounts, which store their financial, data, and personal information as digital numbers. In my opinion, this rise uptrend has lots of positive effects but still has few drawbacks. This essay will provide explanations with examples of this circumstance.
First of all, we can not deny that our world is changing, new inventions have been designed to serve people's needs so online credits have shown up their advantages for people's comfort. Due to the development of the internet has increased dramatically, this helps people send messages or data that they want to use is faster and easier and all of these information will be saved in a card, which is lots convenient to bring aside. For example, a credit card is a high-tech card that keeps your bank account and allows you to take money in the ATM instead of going to the bank to change. Therefore, you can save a lot of time when taking your money, you also use this card as a way to pay bills, which is easy to use and comfortable since you are able to do this action in anywhere you go. Secondly, for some people who scare of losing their important files, they can save them on computers or USB, which supports them in working effectively since this data will be memorized into another owner's devices so it will never be lost. For instance, employees who work in large companies, their computers connect with each other to transfer their files to others, this makes the progress speed up highly because they will never be afraid of losing or missing and giving wrong information.
On the other hand, everything has their own disadvantage and this method also has it too. The most serious problem is that many crimes use the internet as a tool to steal other financials or private information to blackmail victims to give them money to give it back. For example, on the internet, there are many fake advertises, that contains virus to steal or hack victims' devices and lots of people have felt into this trap and they must spend a huge amount of money to take these files on criminals. Moreover, in some situations when people travel to other distances like the forest, mountain or the ocean, where do not have the signal, your online accounts can not help you since they need the internet to open. As a result, you might get in trouble if you keep everything in the digital accounts.
In conclusion, Despite having some negative impacts when using online accounts. However, I believe that the benefits will outweigh these disadvantages and become a good method in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... to use is faster and easier and all of these information will be saved in a card, which is lots ...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fake seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fakes'.
Suggestion: many fakes
...For example, on the internet, there are many fake advertises, that contains virus to stea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71460176991 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49578213383 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528761061947 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.059024296 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.1875 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137181746298 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499726629886 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562762087871 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984455846002 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291630068187 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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