It is strongly believed that some kind of community service which are unpaid, should be made obligatory part of higher education programs. For instance, working for a charity, coping with neighbourhood and teaching sports to children. Personally, I completely agree with this statement undergoing the fact that students should not force them to do that kinds of things without their intention.
First of all, Learning is a way of gaining knowledge from many prospects that what work for theme is very crucial to know. Altogether the goal of learning is becoming a relevant manpower for a particular stuff, and without making the participation of pupils to the practical fields, it is very uncertain that they will gain good knowledge and give positive outputs.so that for instance, if we participate children for a charitable program they will learn the mixed emotions of different people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 143.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24475524476 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85828414503 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.2640921985 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29484911443 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161438560148 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101849346551 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229435558341 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113146983745 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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