Some people believe that violent media directly results in violent behavior.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary settings, media represents prominent role due to their advanced facts. Therefore, some masses consider that violent media is dominantly leads to violence in behaviour. From my prospective, this notion result towards complete agreement and reasons are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
It is worth considering that, although media is advanced innovation of technology which provide information regards society and all over world. However, this also results to violence due to number of reasons. First and foremost is illusion and irrelevant news which is presented by media operators on television, radio and so on for their popularity. In this criteria, news which are based on religion, caste and such activities, this information is provided to public with misconceptions and myths. Due to which, this leads to dominance of discrimination and criticism in society and demolish of brotherhood between citizens. As a result, such misbelief information leads to fracas and violence behaviour in public.
In addition, another major prospective is consider towards movies. Because, young generation of modern era is influenced via their idols in maximum manner. There movies are favourable source of entertainment for public which includes plenty of films regard offence cases, true based stories, aggressiveness, gangsters and so on. Due to which, youngsters become easily influenced from them and adopt such habits. Thus, they try to copy their idols in relative lives because of which violent in behavior becomes increase. Hence, they do such activities which includes crime. As a result, this becomes lead towards negative aspects and proliferation in offence rate.
To recapitulate, i personally consider that, although media is source of informative skill, yet this also represents numerous count of violence facts which results to negative impression on young residents and public of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00917289762 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2925191521 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108959353515 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389037877006 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045997116201 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772729138844 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408085418741 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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