Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Travelling is the undoubtedly the best way to experience cultural diversity. While some people are of view that visitors should follow local customs and traditions, other suggest that host countries welcome cultural diversity. In my opinion, the best traveling experience is the combination of both aspects. In the following essay we will discuss both points of views.
Firstly, there is a popular saying “when in Rome, do as Roman’s do”. Main purpose of travelling is to take time out of routine life to experience new foods and customs. It is way to see different things rather than promoting one’s own ideas. For example, all the travel writers mentions about the culture of the countries they are visiting, there experience with new foods that have never been tasted before and certain other parts of culture. Secondly, some of cultural practices are considered taboo for other cultures. For instance alcohol is prohibited in Islamic countries and some strict laws regarding eating. One should respect these kinds of restrictions during travelling.
On the other hand, there some instances where host countries welcome the cultural differences. For example during the festival season like Christmas and Easter, different people around the world gather and share their own ways to celebrate the time. This is in regards to food and practices. Different cultural exhibition around the worlds also welcome people to come and display their local product and customs to promote different culture. Like in Pakistan there is an industrial exhibition with stalls from various countries showing their crafts .Spain had a recent technological conference where students and inventors were invited to visit from all over the world to showcase their products.
In conclusion, both aspects have their own value. In my opinion the best traveling experience should have cultural exchange from both visitors and host countries provided there are no restrictions. In future, the government needs to give special incentives to people who cannot afford travelling and thus are not able to experience joys of travelling.
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also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43202416918 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73609617651 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558912386707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.1967279322 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6315789474 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357416314529 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107534479006 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126322815457 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222276283426 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876933816955 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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