Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People have different views about the amount of knowledge with regard of how much we can learn from the past. While some people disagree with the idea that we can understand the life of human through our past, I still believe that history plays a valuable role in our lives today.
There are some reasons that make people believe that we can definitely study nothing from the past. Firstly, in the past, there are 2 main roles in a family, men as breadwinners and women as housewives, those prejudices are no longer accepted or appropriate by the modern world. Secondly, in our ancestor’s lives, there are a great deal of traditional rules that you need to followed whether it is right or wrong. For example, during the Nguyen period, you have to follow the King’s orders even it is against the human being. Finally, we are living in the developed world so people they just want to focus into the present and future as they are vitally important for them to study deeper about science and technology for a better quality of life for humankind.
On the other hand, I personally prefer the view that our history is the key information that can help us to understand more about our lives. People from the past seem to have rich experiences about predicting the weather just by observing the colour of sky. For instance, they already know when it will be rain if it is red, or when it will have strong wind if it is yellow,by simply looking at the sky color. Furthermore, many scientists agreed that they have learnt a lot by researching some certain parts of human bones structures as well as some left human’s patterns belongs to the people from the past, so it can lead to new inventions about new medicines for the humanity. Learning about our past can also help us to have a thorough view about our culture and heritage, and that is what we should aim for.
In conclusion, there are still some reasons why we cannot learn anything from our past, but in my view, history is definitely the valuable source of information that we can study more about our human lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65405405405 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50594034932 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4164902111 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.461538462 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4615384615 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1538461538 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351995038006 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133185657535 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972277026519 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251429865538 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594467867486 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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