Some people believe that we have too many choices these days.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is argued by some that nowadays, there are too many choices for us. while it can lead to more satisfaction at the beginning, I completely agree that there are too many options in our time given that it can impose pressure on individuals and is very time consuming.
it goes without saying that having too many options can initially result into more satisfaction. this is mainly because more options will be opened up for people to choose based on their preference, talent or requirements not reluctantly or under compulsion. Academic disciplines as well as career type, for instance, are where having multiple choices can lead to satisfaction due to the fact that people can choose what pleases them or is beneficial to them. having said that, I believe more is not always better.
Firstly, too many choices would put a lot of pressure on individuals. In other words, having too many approximately equal options is mentally draining because each option must be weighed against alternatives to select the best one and yet the risk of making the wrong choice still exists. it may look satisfying at first that we face many options but as the number of choices increases people tend to feel more pressure and potentially dissatisfaction with their choices. I myself, for example, decided to buy a wireless mouse. I used an online app which offered me about 100 items. it was so irritating to choose one of them that at last, despite all the comparisons, I bought one that was not suitable for my purpose.
Another point to consider is that it would be very confusing to choose from several options. this, in turn, can sometimes result into wasting time and energy. Supermarkets, for instance, are filled with a wide variety of brands for a few products. it can confuse individuals and make them spend a great deal of time deciding which one is better while they could buy the product they have come (intend to) for at first glance and make better use of their time and energy for more important issues. In this way, having to many choices does more harm than good.
In conclusion, although it is thought that having too many choices can lead to initial satisfaction, I believe that the negative effects of this issue are more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81136950904 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66207565057 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537467700258 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6400225419 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20917718697 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075469498267 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688708981644 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138947468223 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451958715905 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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