Some people believe that young people should have university education, because this will bring benefit to the society. Others, however, believe that it will lead to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Education lays the foundation of a successful career for everyone. Presently, some people claim that youngsters should be encouraged to enroll in university studies. By contrast, others believe that this phenomenon will only add up to more of unemployed graduates. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are numerous points to support the former view. First and foremost, university education brings plethora of job opportunities for youngsters. To demonstrate, degree holders become successful professionals in various fields such as medicine, education, finance, banking and so on. Thence, it will definitely bless youngsters with successful careers and bright future. Moreover, universities provide young people a platform where they can show their talent in other fields such as sports, singing, dancing and acting. Therefore, the universities have tremendous contribution in the overall development of students. On the contrary, opposite wind is also there.
Numerous points can be mentioned to shore up the latter view. Initially, a greater emphasis on higher education will lead to a massive number of unemployed graduates as job sectors are already flooded with candidates after graduation as every second person is holding a university degree in his hand. Consequently, job vacancies created are far less than the job searching individuals. Thus, it is believed to be true that graduate unemployment will be on the elevation if more students are interested towards university education.
From my notion, both sides have their own significance. Undeniably, the benefits of university education are tremendous. However, I still believe that the unemployment rates among the university graduates are elevating. Thus, youngsters can be motivated to opt for vocational trainings so that they can avail skilled and technical jobs in other fields.
To recapitulate, education opens up the doors to a successful career. It is advisable for youngsters to focus both on theoretical and vocational studies in order to have a bright career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60443037975 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12102174271 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4516438294 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0476190476 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247529008399 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064097864407 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563055125618 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127807925546 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469587674066 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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