Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more for their waste?
In our contemporary society, recycling is believed to have been legislated by government for being more prevalent issue among people. My firm conviction is that in lawful daily life , this remarkable issue should be legislated as a main low . Therefore I completely agree with this subject and this essay will put forth some reason to shed some light of this argument.
First and foremost , the most compelling reason for this debate is that law is the most effective deterrent and imposing element for persuading people to committing or preventing some works. government With considering this issue as a law not only encourage people to do recycling more in detail but also it instills sense of fear to people. A good illustration is that laws have been accepted by people due to imposing fine and imprisonment, substantially.
Another reason for my position is that if the government legislated this issue as a substantial law, this subject would be more prevalent among people. When, recycling is became as an obligation, people in widespread areas will attempt to obeying the law. Thereby, recycling will be accomplished more efficient.
Furthermore , if government forces people to recycle their domestic waste , it could be very lucrative for society and very helpful for saving budget. While, a great deal of budget have been dedicated to recycling from the source, it would reduce the cost of separating rubbish.
To conclude, given the above information , implementation of effective regulation can be alleviated the costs and force people to obey in a prevalent measure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23228346457 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97288286758 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7269851278 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262268313465 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105373661534 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616738119326 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150890770918 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072001281053 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.