In the Future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Printed magazines, newspapers and books are believed to be disappeared in near future and many people will follow daily news and books from online application and sites freely. I personally agree with this notion due to compelling reasons wich will be elaborated in following.
To begin with, regarding to the fastest progression in technology, especially in recent years,many facilities and applications are provided in in fields of books and press which human have been becoming needless to papery stuffs. For instance, already if people have just a simple mobile phone in their pockets, they will meet their daylight needs via phone such as searching for latest news. Accordingly, in the near future People will not tempt to put money and time aside to buy books and newspaper, when they are provided gratis.
Second reason for my position is related to the environment which its concerns has been becoming rampant issue in the world. Irregular deforestation has been posing irreplaceable effects on the surface of the earth. For preparing books and papery stuffs, increasing amount of woods are needed, thereby, it is necessary to reduce this procedure and replace other harmless ways. Online books, Magazines and newspapers are the
Most reliable ways for people to become inform, without printed stuffs.
Contrary, many people accustom to printed books and newspapers, from this objects, while they should become update with the world advances in every fields. If people insist on their old habits, they will lege behind and fed up with this world.
In sunup, considering the reasons of being Update and using online materials are the inevitable subjects of modern world. Groundbreaking development in this field are unpredictable which confront many people with joyful experience, if people have not resisted agains.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, regarding, second, so, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32871972318 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68920692957 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6453396536 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258310668895 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943777932481 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692085882301 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133415003884 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805380358592 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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