Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for country.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In our contemporary society, improvement in economy is believed by government, while other people hold the view there are various considerations which should be developed as same as economy. In this essay I will shed some light on this argument from both sides and give my view before arriving at conclusion.
Although the government is accepted that the progression in economy have been the most remarkable subject, indeed various merits will be brought by this improvement. First and foremost, when in country the economy is powerful enough, the money can be budget on preparing firm infrastructure, in terms of military, health and employment. For instance, if the government has enough money to develop industrial via countries resources, the job opportunities will be brought for job hoppers. Moreover, the equipment military will be built by vigorous economy. The reason for this subject is enough monetary will let government to by update implement for military.
In another position, people have highly insist on other developments which should be noticed by government . Not only is economy advancement noticeable, but also the improvement on education system should be considered. Despite many politicians view, numerous experts and scientific will be treated by efficient educating systems. Therefore the suitable ground for upbringing and educating children will led country to better position and let people to broaden their horizon in their life.
In conclusion, given the above information, I personally think, never is the economy improvement sufficient solely for human’s nature. Enriching people knowledge and education should be attended equally in every development program.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61089494163 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02789348128 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8307657327 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17455606566 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608998868452 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033006171681 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104226044987 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0058835971246 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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