Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays How can this problem be solved

Essay topics:

Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming.
Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays?
How can this problem be solved?

In contemporary industrialized world, global warming is believed to be the most controversial obstacle which human being is confronted. This issue have happened due to greenhouse gases which human civilization have caused. There are various destructive effects which have been resulted by global warming and numerous measures are available to reduce these effects. In this essay I am going to elaborate the main consequences of raise The temperature of the earth and possible solution of this problem.
Global warming means raising the world temperature and have deteriorate impact on the earth and its creatures. First and foremost it can cause evaporation in widespread quantity. When water start to evaporate, some regions are faced to drought. If drought is happen، the people and anima of that area will confront with Famine and scarcity of water. Furthermore, not only does global warming cause excessive evaporation, but also it melts glaciers more rapidly. This issue have been causing different problem which have been destroying human and animals‘ habitat.
For tacking this concerting disaster appropriate measures must be taken. First of all the consumption of fossil fuels should be reduced tremendously and replaced by renewable fuels. These kinds of fuels can be repaired by nature immediately. For instance solar energy, wind energy or nuclear energy. Moreover not only should government impose heavy tolls for preventing deforestation, but also it must encourage people to reforestation. Regenerating forests and trees can pose a grate influence for purging the green house gasses such as carbon dioxide or methane and clean atmosphere.
To conclude, considering above argument, global warming is the serious dilemma which all the people are involved. Taking innovative solutions need to address the consequences of raising global temperature.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...its creatures. First and foremost it can cause evaporation in widespread quantity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61130742049 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94419030713 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636042402827 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9544661686 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279870864662 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754712671122 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607751179556 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163360299272 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660032234745 0.056905535591 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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