The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world’s cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in the quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more.
Discuss possible ways to encourage the use of public transport.
While in our contemporary world humans have witnessed vast advancement in public transport network, most of people are reported to tend going to travel with own private car. This rampant issue has been causing many population in terms of environmentally. There are various possible action which can alleviate the tempt of people for using own vehicle. In this essay I will put forth some ways for addressing this phenomenon.
Despite the fact that personal cars are the most convenient implement for transmitting, public transportation can be substituted by effort of government. First and foremost public transportation should be quicker and more accessible. When in every district of the town people can access to metros or buses most of the time, they will have more interest to using them. A good illustration for this position is Japan. There are numerous subways in every part of the city and between two cities and in every 30 second a train is in station, even though a number of passengers are little.
Secondly, if the cost of the tickets were reduced by government, most of the people will tempted to travel or commute via public vehicles. Not only should the price of the tickets be reduced, but also state or private companies can be inspired their staff by put privilege for commuting with public machines. For instance giving free ticket for public transport systems to intensive employees.
Thirdly, government should put enough budget aside for improving the appearance if stations, trains and buses. Although cleanness of the public places especially vehicles have been prioritizing, the apparent beauty and attraction can encourage people to use these vehicles. Az a result people after awhile will get accustomed to use public transportation.
In conclusion, mentioned solution are recommended to state section to improve the quality of public transport for attracting more passengers. Government can adapted various ways which help to alleviate the rate of pollution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Suggestion:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'tempt'
Suggestion: tempt
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Suggestion:
...nsport systems to intensive employees. Thirdly, government should put enough bu...
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Suggestion: a while
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to using'.
Suggestion: accustomed to using
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26729559748 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89129867119 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7110671996 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5294117647 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159554969096 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510512274577 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359496825682 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874342660034 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510864869989 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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