COUNTRIES ARE BECOMING MORE AND MORE SIMILAR BEXAUSE PEOPLE ARE ABLE TO BYE THE SAME PRODUCY ANY WHERE IN THE WORLD.
DO YOU THINK IT IS POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?
Some people are believed to become most of the countries the same during the years. There are several reasons for this matter and in my opinion these reasons have positive points. This essay will put forth some results to support my view before arriving at conclusion.
First and foremost, when people around the world have the same availability to choise the particular services or products from every part of the world, people can become familiar with other culture and nation. Although, many barriers can be made by the some prejudiced people, many facilities which are brought by this matter can satisfy everyone. For instance some different types of food which are made by special materials in specific countries or useful programs in terms of educational, historical or public information which are produced in a country but other countries start to publish them and could be really helpful.
This condition not only enrich our knowledge, but also it is extremely lucrative for trading and business. Despite the view of opponent people, business can be boosted by importing and exporting the products of countries very easily. A good illustration is about importing cell phones and laptops from other countries, people can be acquainted with the exporter's technology.
Moreover, this situation can offer many benefits for tourist industrial. If in every country there are the same facilities, it will be more easier to travel in the destination country. For example in terms of banking access, when in all of the world there is a unify banking system, tourism will travel more confidence, consequently.
In conclusion, given the above, only later access to other nationalities products, people can get special benefits. Due to the distance have been reduced by advancement in technology, it is better to be accustomed with other culture and counties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...hough, many barriers can be made by the some prejudiced people, many facilities whic...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'exporters'' or 'exporter's'?
Suggestion: exporters'; exporter's
...ries, people can be acquainted with the exporters technology. Moreover, this situation ...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ere are the same facilities, it will be more easier to travel in the destination country. F...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ple in terms of banking access, when in all of the world there is a unify banking system, ...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...cess, when in all of the world there is a unify banking system, tourism will travel mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23745819398 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7391365602 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5283694001 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137359101912 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508709568087 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583851275629 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738956353824 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409238187304 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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