Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Advertisements are believed to be one of the effective way for provoking people to buy some especial product, while some people hold the view that promotions are not influential any more. In this essay I will shed some light on this argument from both sides and give my opinion before arriving at conclusion.
Many people due to several reasons are saying that publicity is still provocative enough for persuading people to buy goods. To begin with, advertisement is the simplest and most available way for introducing products to customers. In the world which people are confronted with the wide range of products, if they want just buy one simple item, thereby it is necessary to attain enough knowledge about different kinds of products and the most accessible way is promotion. Secondly, golden opportunities are given to suppliers and factories to compete with their revival, speak out about their merits of products and encourage costumer to buy. Accordingly, companies for gaining the competitive edge will try to improve their products quality.
In another hand, many people are believed that promotions are not impressive. Although people have cared about advertisement many years, nowadays these are so ordinary and repetitive way for drawing people attentions. A good illustration is about advertisements between programs in TV. In retrospect, people used to see most of the tv advertisement, but todays during the press‘s promotions people just do their chores. Furthermore, in most publicity, people witness many exaggerations and overstatements. Az a result advertisements are not reliable any more.
In conclusion, considering both sides of debate, publicity have many merits and demerits. I personally believe that not only is advertisement only way to introduce new products, but also people can compare goods with each other and buy the best choice.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37074829932 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06556193092 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5151064675 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.266666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267383527881 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899854245603 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604432377039 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169066222222 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524130076866 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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