Do you think human behavior is based on nature or nurture?
Mankind behaviour is believed to be originate from their upbringing, while scientists have found many evidence to prove that genetic codes have inevitably affect on human treating. I personally think both views of argument are involved in human behaviour. In this essay I will put forth some reasons to support my view before arriving at conclusion .
In one hand, some people accept that their children will behave according what their parents will teach them. This group are believed that a children behavior is influenced by their parent’s behavior and in upper ages their behavior have shaped mostly based on peer pressure and communicating in society. Due to this fact apprehensive parents try to lay down rules for making influential barrier to inspire to their juvenile not have behavior against low at home or community. For instance, cleaning up theirs mess, pulling their weight or accepting the consequences of wrong behavior which is life threatening.
Given the above consideration, although parent’s upbringing has the significant impact on human treating, the heredity issue, nowadays, is really controvertial and persuasive. Based on scientists recent investigation, the existence of a person in terms of mental and physical has appeared in their genetic molecule which is named DNA. DNA is the hereditary molecule which can be transferred from generation to generation . Human being have always illustrated their family characteristics. Not only, has DNA disclosed family appearance features in their babies shape, but also it has undeniable affect on children behavior.
In conclusion, I think each human character include, whatever they have inherited from their parent and every things have experience in their path of life and their community.
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...their path of life and their community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52747252747 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00053108247 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622710622711 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7270988244 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131445491871 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538048709485 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462842842588 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831337979754 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00874611855928 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.