Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and humans. Discuss both sides of debate and give your opinion.
Prisoning animals in Zoo is believed to be beneficial for humans and animals, while most of the people have opponent view and they have though this is severe captivity which selfish human‘s has imposed on animals. In this essay I will shed some light on this argument from both sides and give my partial idea.
On the one hand, keeping animals in zoos are thought to have mutual benefits for human and animals. Firstly, most of the species who are in the verge of extinction can be conserved. Although in the wild life and nature there are numerous gifts for raising many creatures, increasing number of anonymous dangers are provided. For instance hunting and poaching animals via human for commercial propose, thereby animals will be imposed in the verge of extinction. Annually many rihno’s horns are discovered which the hunter kill the animal for just smuggling horn. However, in nature many predators are waiting for hunting and meet their innate needs.
Contrary, there are people who hold the view that Animal captivation is immoral action. When animals are in Zoo prison, they are deprived from primary rights which every creature need to attain. Furthermore, living in a preserved areas will be imposed many devastating effects on animal‘s instinct. Not only will they lose their natural behavior like looking for food in surrounding wild environment , also free and provided food will become them fat which it cause many diseases in animals. Moreover, from scientists perspective depression among animals is rampant issue in zoos.
In conclusion, considering above argument, captivating animals will pose negative consequences on animals nature, although it would be helpful for keeping alive many diverse gene. I personally agree with the statement that freedom in the earth is the primary right for every creature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22372881356 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58162713553 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1725906669 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326774880906 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11097648553 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793887262363 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201696003976 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406310889953 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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