Nowadays experience is more valued in the work place than knowledge in many countries .
Do you think advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In our contemporary society, the skill and professionalism are believed to be more valid by the majority of employers, while the other people hold the view that education is the most important factor for labors. I personally think that the merits of hiring experimental employee outweigh the demerits. In this essay I will put forth some reasons to support my view before arriving at conclusion.
The only main drawback of having not educational degree from university is that students can be informed about the appearance of their major.
Students have learnt theoretically either about previous drawbacks and achievement of accomplished projects or have noted about the former stable principles of the major which they have educated. As a result of that the informative employees have been justified about primary principle, while many ways should be examined by the empiricism trainers.
Having said that however, I feel that being skillful and expert at work‘s field has more benefit. First and foremost, the budget which is dedicated to learning labors will be reduced. Therefore if the employed person be enough expert and proficient in the specific major, the expenses of their errors will be plummet remarkably. A good illustration is about accounting department. A new accountant who worked in another company, had gained enough experience about the way of how efficiently control company‘s account since have started to work.
Another compelling reason for my position is that when the employer hire proficient jobholder, not only is the employee informative enough about work environment, but also the person has broad horizon about firm‘s procedure. Consequently the employe‘s valuable experience is available for conducting in severe circumstance.
In conclusion, given the above consideration the benefits of employing expert jobholders are outweighed disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57638888889 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06044432141 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2178925752 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835885950545 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032181186716 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312751878747 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.040502947282 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269730775584 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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