Some people believed that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In our contemporary world, many choices are thought to have been existed in every aspects of our daily life. With glancing in people's surrounding area, numerous options will be appeared. I personally agree with increasing the number of options in in life. In this essay I will put forth some reasons to support my view and extend the argument with two main related example before arriving at conclusion.
First and foremost considering nowadays education system and comparing it with 100 years ago which is the major measurement for this debate. While prestigious universities set up many years age, they have recently became accessible for ordinary people. Students around the world have been getting privilege to register in their favorable majors and universities. Not only is the accessibility to various universities is convenient in compare of 50 years ago, but also there are many founds which are provided by government and national union for motivated students to follow their interest with lots of option which are available for them.
Another compelling reason for my position is about recreational purpose and activity. Despite the long distance for some entertaining destination, progressing in technology especially in terms of transportation have been simplifying human's travel. In addition, many activities are brought by epoch making invention during holidays in recent years.
In sum up, considering above argument, recent modern world have provided manifold choices for human being, in terms of facilities, education, traveling or living condition.in fact nowadays world have been offering various option which give people the golden opportunities to fulfill their personal dreams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56153846154 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91069238799 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3953267368 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184456778365 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666963057575 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309231737433 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108753820059 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425552102709 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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