Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in the world, subjects like science and technology are more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
History is believed to be the most major subject which should be prioritized in school’s lessons, while others hold the view that science and technology have especial importance in our contemporary society and schools should pay more attention about these subjects. In this essay I will shed some light from both sides of argument and extent my partial support to the latter view before arriving at conclusion.
Many people are believed that history is the most essential subject in schools due to compelling reasons which I am going to elaborate. First and foremost, when children have been reading the history, they can get numerous useful information. Many precious experiences can be achieved by pupils via narratives and adventurous in history books without wasting their time for repeat their failures. Moreover, not only can Children read previous people’s sacrifices, courtesies and loyalties for their aims and countries, but also it can be a great motivation for stimulating their liberal feelings. As a result history is estimated a main subject in Schools.
In an other hand many people are said that science is the most crucial matter. If people noticed during technology progression, they would realize a great deal of attention should be paid by children in Schools on science subjgect. Despite the fact that every child should follow own tendency, for living in nowadays society everyone should have increasing amount of knowledge. Therefore, for working with new implement and device, huge consideration are needed in terms of learning technology.
In conclusion, with regarding above argument,I believe technology is the most crucial needs rather than history. Although both subjects are essential to learn children’s in schools, science is the groundbreaking element for current word.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42907801418 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82849158913 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8010389867 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255511445897 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880530193214 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778302247387 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150778806477 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520555415913 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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