Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choice on everyday matter ( such as food, cloth and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Making decisions by children are argued to be the way which posing destructive effects on them. On the other hand some people are believed, that kids will be learnt via making own major choice from childhood. In this essay I am going to shed some light on this argument from both sides and extend my partial support before arriving at conclusion.
It is believed that if children attempted to choice their daily matters, they will become individualism. First and foremost in this view is pointed to close horizontal view of children. When a child from childhood has learnt just noticing about own needs, he or she will put own chores in first step with higher degree of priority. For instance meeting own need will be thought more crucial rather than others needs. Moreover not only have children easily learnt in their childhood, but also they undoubtedly accustomed to every training. Even though children the child be smart guy, he or she has not enough differentiation power to put distinction between some tasks; so with noting to this principle that childhood is critical period which the lessons are perceived by children, they would become selfish, if just learnt attention about private needs.
Opposite view of former argument is said that private decisions should be made by children themselves due to compelling reasons. Firstly, many ways will be examined by children. Unless children attempt to trail and error, they can not get experiences. If people started to experience from childhood, they will have better choice in every major aspect of their life. For example, hardly will people lean to save money, if they can not decide how expense their money from lower ages.
In conclusion, with considering above views , I personally think children should be accustomed to nowadays life which need to making crucial decisions every day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07540983607 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55761914577 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7955402693 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212145564198 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769084631704 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525805086144 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122718485644 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416411298855 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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